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20130129

IO6-Writing-Edith Peña


1650 mantaro street
El Tambo - Huancayo

Ms Melina Lee
Starline Travel
16bayfield Drive
Mayfield, NY 22267

Dear Ms Lee

     I´m Writing to apply for the position that was advertising in the Daily news. My background makes me well-qualified to be international tour guide.
        I graduated four years ago to the Continental University, I´m degree in business Administratión. I can Speak many languages for example, spanish, english and a little mandarin an I like to travel so much and I like to know many places too, and the most important is that I Know the history and geography of these countries.
    Thank you very much for your consideration, and I look forward to hearing from you.
   
Sincerely,

Edith Peña

20130127

Wrinting N° 2 - Diana Miranda Aguilar

1775 La Victoria
El Tambo – Huancayo

Ms. Gracy
Personnel Dept.
P.O. Box 401
San Francisco CA 61240

Dear Ms. Gracy:

 I'm writing to apply for the position that was advertised in the
Huancayo News. My background makes me very  well- qualified
to be an personal shopper. I will graduate next year from San
Marcos University in fashion design and I participated in many
fashion shows of my country and I could won some of these. 
My goal is become like Maju Mantilla because is a beautiful
woman and she has a lot of experience in modeling and now
she's a famous designer. My friends always want that I give
them advices with their clothes because they say that I know
how combine my outfit. My résumé is enclosed. Thank you very
much for your consideration, and I look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely,

Diana Nicol
Diana Miranda Aguilar

Cover letter - IO6 – Noelia Diaz Zea

155 Colinas
El Tambo-Huancayo Junin

Huancayo, January 22, 2013 
Ms. Melinda Lee 
International Tour Guide 
Mayfield, NY 22267   

Dear Ms. Lee:

   I am writing to apply for the position you need to make your group travel to Hawaii, South America and East Asia in its highly recognized company and is very welcome in this city of Huancayo. My knowledge of this work makes me a good tour guide.
I do know that I've worked on a couple of companies operating National and International travel realize many different countries of South America and Europe. I graduated two years ago at the UNCP and now I am doing my Masters. Well apart from that domain languages ​​as English, German, Italian and Portuguese. My resume is attached. Thank you for your consideration and await your answer.  
  
Sincerely,

Noelia Diaz Zea  
Noelia Diaz Zea

Cover letter - IO6 - Sergio Arroyo Ojeda :)

International Tour Guide

145 Sebastián Lorente
El tambo – Huancayo                                           
Junín     
                                                                                                            
Ms. Melinda Lee                                                                                      
International Tour Guide
P.O. Box 401   
San Francisco CA 61240 
                                                                                                                                   
Dear Ms. Lee:            

I'm writing to apply for the position that you need for lead your small-group tours to Hawaii, South America, and East Asia. My abilities make me very well
qualified to be an excellent international tour guide. . Last year I worked in a travel agency, I worked with a lot of tourists from different countries traveling to some places like to Arequipa, Trujillo, Cuzco and Tacna. I graduated 2 months ago from Continental University in the specialism in Tourism and Environment and I have taken several courses in languages and tours because I worked with people with Europe and I will graduate in French and Italian in 3 months in Word Language institute. My resume is enclosed. Thank you very much for your consideration, and I took forward to hearing from you.   

Sincerely,
Sergio Arroyo
Sergio Arroyo

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20130125

IO6 - Cover Letter

                                                                                                                                             695 Ayacucho                                                                                                                      Huancayo, Junin                                                                                                                  Ms. Melinda Lee                                                                                                                  International Tour Guide   
 Mayfield,NY 22267 
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              Dear Ms. Lee:            

            I'm writing to apply for the position that you need for lead your small-group luxury tours to Hawai,South America, and East Asia. My background makes me very well-qualified to be an excellent tour guide. I will graduate in 3 months from Alas Peruanas University with a degree in tourism and I have taken several courses in tour guide. During my vacation I worked in an agency travel called "Travel and Routes" ,working like tour guide, working with national and internationals tourists from different countries. I am also work with people from Asia and I speak languages like English, Spanish, and Japanese fluently. My resume is enclosed. Thank you very much for your consideration, and I took forward to hearing from you.   
                                                                                                                                                                                         Sincerely,

Edson Sotomayor
Edson Sotomayor                                                                                                                                             

Rd1_io6_Styven chavez

Reader's Digest Report


Styven Chavez                                       Teacher: Antonio Rios                      Date: 25th january-2013

 WATCHING THE WORLD

AWAKE


There are a lot of events at the world, there are a lot of people who discover something in some point at the world. There are new invents and something to help the people. Another kind of events are natural disasters. When you are sitting right now someone is search something to help me world, or to make a lot of money with that.

One of the most natural disaster ocurred in New York, hurricane Sandy. Another bug event was the the terrorist attack that occurred on September 11, 2001.
In Antarctica, scientist suspect about the existence of aliens. They fopund sonething like a misterious plant. the think 
populations of alien plant species have already been found in the Western Antarctic Peninsula.


felony:felony is a serious crime in some common law countries.
prosthetic: is an artificial device extension.
nonindigenous:  not originating in and characteristic of a particular region or country.
jawbone:is a line of Bluetooth mobile phone.
surgically:Of, relating to, or characteristic of surgeons or surgery.



20130123

Summary - Sergio Arroyo Ojeda IO6

FIRTS AT THE ROOF OF THE WORLD

Th story is about the Tibet, its so the coldest inhabited place on the earth. But the mistery and curiosity in the story is the handprints and footprints that David Zhang discovered in a rock, the main theory is they early Tibetans could have refuge for the extreme cold and they survived 20,000 years ago to the low temperatures. Zhang hopes to explore the Tibetan Plateu to collect more evidence of this incredible humans.

Sergio Arroyo

20130122

I06-RD1-Edith Peña


Reader's Digest Report
"I Am Nujood, Age 10 and Divorced"

from the book I Am Nujood, Age 10 and Divorced, by Nujood Ali with Delphine Minoui

When I saw the photography I suppose that the history its about a divorce of the little girl in a strange country because their culture permit this situation.
This story is terrible for me because I have a sister and She is 10 years old and I can`t imagine this situation. She started telling her history when she stated in front of the judge and say him "I want a divorce".
She explain her history sequentially, The first part, it is the agreement, She was born in the village in Yemen in Khardji. It's a tradition in the village that the woman marry very young. Her father told her that he has good news, and He said "Nujood, you will be married". I think that she may have felt scared and She didn`t understand this situation, but the situation in her house was very complicate, because her father didn`t have a job and her brothers sold many things in the street. They did many things to get some money for your house.
She remembers that afternoon to her father that was chewing khat with his neighbors, because it help him forget his troubles.
In these days her father accepted the Faez`s proposal, because He was looking a wife. That evening her sister gave many reasons for example, Nujood is too young to get married because She was 10 years old, however in this country the men give the orders.
After that, She remembered her wedding, in that day She didn´t know who will be her husband. She cried so much because She  went with her husband to another place with her new family.

She described her first day as Faez`s wife, She knew her Mother in law and her house, later she learned that marriages to little girls are not unusual in the countryside, so exist a proverb that says, "To guarantee a happy marriage, marry a nine year old girl".
After that She described her first night as a wife, She told a terrible experience, because that night She lost her virgin. She cried, gasped, ran, shrieked however the people near her, They did not help.

She had many obligations in the new house, She obeyed to mother in law`s orders and all days was repeat the bad dreams especially in the nights, after some days Her husband began hitting her It was a terrible experience and when She say "I want to divorce" He said "My brothers and cousins will kill you, because you are my wife"

She was very sad, so her husband and She visited her family and she could explain her situation, however nobody helped her, so She visited to father`s second wife and she gave help and She said "you must go straight to court". The next day she went to the courthouse to request help, because She wanted to the divorce.
The people were surprised because it was unusual that a little girl was married and request a divorce, it is the reason that many people helped her because She has right. The judge say that he has never seen a case like her and He explained her, that in Yemen is frequently married off quite young, before the legal age of 15, it's a tradition and the little girls never was showed up at a courthouse.
According to Yemeni law the contract it was valid, however after the trial She won and She returned with her family and now lived happy, because the divorce changed her life and She could returned to the school and when she grow up She`ll be a lawyer, like a Shada (her lawyer) to defend other girls like her.


Vocabulary Use:

Ashamed: /əˈʃeɪmd/ adj : Feeling bad because you are aware that others know that you or someone connected with you has done something wrong or embarrassing.
Gasp: /gæsp/ v: To take a short quick breath through the mouth, esp. because of surprise, pain, or shock.
Shriek: /ʃrik/ n: a loud, high cry:
Courthouse: /ˈkɔrtˌhɑʊs/n: a building that contains rooms where trials and other legal cases happen.
Guarantee: /ˌgær·ənˈti/n: Guarantee is also the state of being certain of a particular result.

letter I 06 vanessa B.

DEAR EDITOR:

I´m writing about your article on adbusters. I specially liked the one on TV turnoff week.
In my opinion, this one is a great idea. For one thing, I think a TV turnoff week is a good choice for the people because it is a good and easy  way of save the planet, at the same time, save money. Also people can change their habits of watching TV, playing video games, send e-mails, etc. into spending time with their families. Finally, I think the TV turnoff week is a good idea because for only one day all the city will be quiet.

Sincerely,

VANESSA BRICEÑO CABELLO

letter_I06_Styven chavez

Writing:

An article entitled "first at the roof of the world", by Michelle Gad, discusses about its first inhabitants. There are theories and facts. A first theorie made by scientist is that the first inhabitants of Tibet arrived only around 4000 years ago, after the end of its most recent Ice Age.
After that scientist investigate it more and found 19 human handprints and footprints, enbedded in ancient rock at the edge of a hot spring. That was a surprise whne they revealed that the prints were actually more than 20000 years ago.
Another fact is that scientists found remains of a stove there, it means that the people had the ability to adapt to such a cold environment.
The last theory about prints is that they did it only for fun, at the moment scientist are recollecting more evidence about it.

letter - I06-Sotomayor Ore Edson

Dear Editor:

I`m writing about your article on adbusters. I especially liked the one on TV Turnoff Week. In my opinion TV Turnoff Week is a great idea. For one thing I think that TV turnoff Week is a good idea because we can spend time with our family. Also TV Turnoff Week is a good idea because we should have more free time we can read books or we can read magazines or we can help in our house. And finally TV Turnoff Week is a good idea because we can go out with our friends or our family we need to learn how to share our free time with the people that are important for us. I spend time with my family and I learn interesting things about my family and I like to know about that. I think we should learn to spend time with our family or with our friends and share important things for have good memories.

 

                                                                                                                                      Sincerely,

                                                                                                                               Edson Sotomayor

Summary IO6 Tatiana Artica


SUMMARY
FIRTS AT THE ROOF OF THE WORLD

In 1986, David Zhang discovered in Tibet 19 human handprints and footprints embedded in a rock,
revealing that the early Tibetans could have survived 20,000 years ago to the low temperatures as - 40 degrees Celsius, thanks to the stoves inside their refuges had adapted to extreme cold.

20130120

RD IO6

IO6-RD1 Noelia Diaz Zea                Reader's Digest Report                          
  
Student's Name: Noelia Diaz Zea     Teacher's Name: Antonio Rios
Date: 19 January-2013
How to Be a Good Father
Author: Awake

think this article is about the people suffering hunger by either work, study or maybe a psychological problem but I think there is way to change this.  

WORLD: Hunger is a serious problem because many people do not like to be fed either by the economy, there are many people who do not win as it should be or is the work or school and for this reason there are many diseases because people are low defenses and this produces poor diet.  
BRITAIN AND THE UNITED STATE: 24% of the people of this city were surveyed including professionals think that participate in unethical conduct can be successful, and 16% think that if commit a crime would get what they want.
ARGENTINA:  teachers in this country take a full free either by stress or maybe because some teachers are mistreated and is 3 out of 5 teachers. 
SOUTH KOREA: people living alone in this city think make this something common or something usual.
CHINA: said the third of the country's cities of China does not meet the new standards gubernamentles and that new versions of air quality would not work in 2016, and water quality was obtained in the underground there is very bad .
VOCABULARY USE :
1: Farmer- /ˈfɑː(r)mə(r)/- noun
-Someone who owns a farm or manages it as their job.

2:Feed -/fiːd/- verb
- To provide people with food so that they can live.

3:Waste -/weɪst/- noun
-The failure to use something valuable in an effective way, so that it does not produce the benefits that it could.  

4:household -/ˈhaʊsˌhəʊld/-noun
-The people who live in a house or flat when they are considered as a single unit.  

5:Source -/sɔː(r)s/ -noun
-A person, place, or thing that provides something that you need or want.

20130117

letter_io6_Styven Chavez

Dear Editor:

Your article is so interesting. I want to talk about one issue. BUY NOTHING DAY. A lot of people buy everything and I think this is a kind of sick. If we don't buy anything maybe we can make a better world. If we need something we need to get it, create it, and try to make it. People will understand the importance of using their brains. And finally a lot of people think that they have a lot of money the will get everything, that's not true. I think if someone want something he/she need to fight for it and I believe in that day, I will do everything I want without money only with my capacity to do something.

rd1 i 06 vanessa briceño yap

Reader's  Digest   Report

 

 

NAME: Briceño Cabello Vanessa                                             TEACHER: Antonio Ríos

TITLE:  Whatever Happened to Patience?  (AWAKE)

 

-         What do you think the article will be about?

I think this is about how important is to be patient with yourself and with other people.

 

-          Describe in as much detail as possible what you understand of it.

Some analysts suggest that in recent years many people are less patient because of    technology. Researchers suggest that digital technology, from cellphones to cameras to email to iPods, is changing our lives.

Dr. Jennifer hartstein explains that "we have become an immediate gratification culture, and we expect things to move quickly, efficiently and in the way we want. When that doesn't happen, we tend to become increasingly frustrated and irritable, a sign of impatience". She adds, "We've lost the art of just slowing down and enjoying the moment".

Experts have observed that many people do not have the patience to read through lengthy text in print. Why? Because they are accustomes to navigating speedily through Web pages, jumping from blurb to blub and from bullet to bullet, hoping to land on the main point as quickly as possible.

 

 

-         Vocabulary.

 

PROOFREAD [ˈpruːf.riːd] verb:

To find and correct mistakes in proofs.

 

-         LENGTHY [ˈleŋk .θi] adjective:

Continuing for a long time.

 

-         BLURB [blɝːb] noun:

A short description of a book or a film, etc., written by the people who have produced it, and intended to make people want to buy it or see it.

 

-         HARM [hɑːrm] noun:

Physical or injury or damage.

 

-         SOBERING [ˈsəʊ.bər.ɪŋ] adjective:

Making you feel serious or think about serious matters.

I06 - Reader's Digest 1 - Sergio Arroyo Ojeda

 Reader's Digest Report
 Whatever Happened to Patience?

AWAKE!

3. What do you think the article will be about?

The patience in the people gets lost little by little in different situations and ages.
4.  
 The digital technology like to computers, Smartphone's, cameras, mobile phones, etc; changed our life. Because this technology do things very quickly and is not necessary to wait for anything. The doctor Jennifer Hartstein says we have become an immediate gratification culture, and we expect things to move quickly, efficiently and in the way we want. 

We have many impatience for have results immediately that we damage our lives with problems like to eat too quickly or procrastination, result of the bad decisions we generate violence, economic problems and up to loss of friends.

It is important to improve, to be more patient and to worry a bit for our life and health.

     
5.  Vocabulary Use: 
 Tailgate [teyl-geyt]  
Noun
 1.
the board or gate at the back of a wagon, truck, station wagon, etc., which can be removed or letdown for convenience in loading or unloading.
verb (used without object)
2.
to follow or drive hazardously close to the rear of another vehicle.

Shallow [shal-oh] 
Adjective
 1.
of little depth; not deep: shallow water.
2.
lacking depth; superficial: a mind that is not narrow but shallow.
  
Sober [soh-ber]  
Adjective
 1.
not intoxicated or drunk.
2.
habitually temperate, especially in the use of liquor.
  
Tend [tend]  
Verb (used without object)
 1.
to be disposed or inclined in action, operation, or effect to do something: The particles tend to unite.
2.
to be disposed toward an idea, emotion, way of thinking, etc.: He tends to be overly optimistic. Herreligious philosophy tends toward pantheism.
  
Realm [relm]  
Noun
 1.
a royal domain; kingdom: the realm of England.
2.
the region, sphere, or domain within which anything occurs, prevails, or dominates: the realm of dreams.

IO6- RD1- Tatiana Artica


READER'S DIGEST REPORT
INMIGRATION – DREAMS AND REALITIES
Author: Awake

There are many people who travel to other cities and even countries in search of new opportunities to study or work, one reason is unemployment and other, the low quality of education in our country, then people move away from their family because they have to seek financial support to survive.

Israel: Every parent wants their child to be born healthy, but now we have seen that many children are born with defects, it may be because many of them have not planned a pregnancy and they don't take the necessary precautions before you become pregnant, however these children should have a better quality of life possible.

Australia: the percentage of people who prefer cohabitation to marriage has increased because, of each 10 couples, 8 prefer to live together before marriage.
Greece: The people around the world live in a critical condition of stress for not having money, this leads them to commit suicide, I think that the government should implement a mental health program for people who really need it.

United States: I think we should think about the food we waste, because many children suffer famine. In all parts of the world people die for this cause.

Madagascar: The mission we have as living beings is to preserve nature, animals are in danger of extinction, we must not destroy nature, and we should care the animals.

Vocabulary
1.      Cohabit: /kōˈhabit/ verb
Live together and have a sexual relationship without being married.
2.       Famine: /ˈfamən/ noun
extreme scarcity of food.
3.       Wrongful: /ˈrôNGfəl/adj.
not fair, just, or legal.
A stock or supply of money, materials, staff that can be drawn on by a person or organization in order to function effectively.
5.      Threat: /THret/ noun
A statement of an intention to inflict pain, injury, damage, or other hostile action on someone in retribution for something done or not done.