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Writing 3

Writing 3 

Does the lost city of Atlantida really exist?

Since i was a child , the mystery of the lost city of Atlantida always interested me , how was posible that a city could totally disapper? I have always wanted know what exactly happened.This city existed or not?

Recently, in my school  , my teacher of history talked about that. The Atlantida city was ubicated in a rich mineral place , so they may have had a lot of minerals to profit , like gold , silver and diamonds ; the only evidence that we have about this city is the narration of Platon , he said  that the Atlantida was a great and big city , but in a certain time, this city started to go down for the corrupcion and trangressions of the people of the city , like rape , murder and infidelity . The gods must finished with that so they sent them a tidal wave .Later of 24 hours , the city totally dissaper .

This history could not be true , because the place where the Atlandida city existed , has not a sea ; another version is that the city was destroyed by a eruption of a volcano , this version may have been true , but there is not a especific evidence that could check that .

The version that i think that could be true is that  the city was invaded by Vikingos or pirates who were looking for places where settle down , and when they arived to Atlandida's city , the city refused to be conquered , so they fighted and losted the war .The invaders destroyed the city , they took everything they found , without leaving any trace that the city ever existed.

Despite there are so many versions about the existing of this city , i belive that in the future we could resolve this mystery that have been following us like the platon's years.



Camila Tramontana Hinostroza 

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