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Letter to Claim.

Southville, June 7, 2013
Silver Seas Resort
Southville, Florida

Dear Randall McLean:

I´m writing to complain about my problem because the hotel is very different from the advertisement.

You offered a quiet and relaxing but the room is very noisy because the front is an express via and all the days pass many cars making noise. Also you offered a private beach but in the room left a notice saying: "Sorry, the beach is closed today". You offered that all rooms would newly and redecorated but it was totally messed up and some things were old. Finally you offered a fabulous ocean views but I see a lot of cars since my window.

After of all would ask fulfill their promises and stop cheating some people with a advertisement so.


Sincerely Yours,
Steffanie Cosme P.
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1 comment:

  1. TonyRiversJune 8, 2013 at 7:19 PM

    This is a great letter.
    Anyway, some phrases are not complete:
    > a quiet and relaxing...?
    > in the room (...) left a notice
    > would (...) newly and redecorated
    Please revise this expression:
    > After of all would ask fulfill their promises and stop cheating some people with a advertisement so.

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