English is not usefull only in the moment of socialize, this language helps business persons at the moment of making contact with intenrational companies, too. Business people recongize that English is really important, but now it doesn't reaches the expectations that they have. China is the world factory, so it's language is fundamental at the moment of doing business. According to German Alarco, an investigator of Centrum Catolica, think that although Mandarin Chinese is a complicated language, it is relevant and it is important to learn it.
Personally, I think that English should continue as the world language in spite of the fact that many agree that Mandarin Chinese should be. I recognize that it is an important language too; therefore, we can learn it as a language more, but I think that English is principal and easy to learn. Furthermore, most of the Chinese web sites have a translate to English, it means that English can continue for many years,but it doesn't mean that Mandarin Chinese is really importan too.
Nowadays, people are making new studies to know what is the world languange, and the Mandarin form of Chinese will probably be the next must-learn language in Asia. However, other studies demonstrate that English is expanding more and more.1
In conclusion, if we investigate more we will realize that learning Mandarin Chinese helps a lot, but English is everywhere we go. If we know English, we may take advantage of globalization. In almost all the world we will find a person who speaks English. And finally, if Chinese Mandartin is the language of the future, that future will be distant and English is the wold language now.
1."nglish in Decline as a First Language, Study Says".http://news.nationalgeographic.com/news/2004/02/0226_040226_language.html
Personally, I think that you have to improve essay a lot. First, I do not know if you are in favor or againt that English will be a global language because in your thesis statement, you say : "other people think", but what about you you have to state what is your point of view clearly, and I do not know what organization you are using. the second paragraph you state the other's side argument and the counterargument, but on the other paragraphs you do not do so; for example, first you say I THINK THAT ENGLISH... Then you say, BUT I THINK ENGLISH IS NOT GOOD . Ido not understand that part. This essay is state if you are in favor or against about something. So I suggest you imrove your essay a lot.
ReplyDeleteLorena, use a specific pattern of organization to write your argumentative essay.
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