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SECOND WRITING: MARITE MARIN LINDO
ABORTION
            A big problem in our society is the abortion because women star their sexual life in their early age or when they are teenagers without protection. As a result they become pregnant and they decide to abort, for they don’t want have a baby. In addition for men and women who find themselves facing the moral dilemma of whether or not to determinate a pregnancy? However they practice the abortion illegally. Although some people think that abortion is one alternative to solve their problem because they don’t plan to have a baby, I believe that if we permit the abortion, we support irresponsibility of men and women.
            Opponents maintain that abortion can help girls who were rape and they have the right to decide if they want to have a baby or not (Dr. Sanchez, 230). However, the fetus is a person with rights because is a new life growing inside and is a precious and unique gift from God that they should value. Also for unwanted babies could be adopted for many childless couples ho are desperate to adopt.
            Opponents also claim that girls who are younger and don’t have support of their couple, they would abort. However, women have obligations to the fetus because they consented to sex and they didn’t use any contraception; as a consequence, they knew that the pregnancy might result (casallo). Also they should be conscious about their act.
            The final arguments advanced by opponents say that all know how to take care of their body and they believe in a woman’s right to control their body and they deserves this right no matter where they live(“Casallo”). Nevertheless, they aren´t conscious that the abortion can damage their body both physical and emotional that cause cancer or other irreversible consequences as a not having a child anymore (Dr. Sanchez, 231).
            In conclusion, there aren’t arguments to practice the abortion because the only one who decides on our life is God life. Moreover, if we want that decrease the rate of abortion, we tell them about consequences of it and the importance to preserve the life. Also, for people who are sexually active, they should have a plan for their life in order to not to become pregnant.

-Dr.  Carlos Sanchez        “Human’s life is a right”, second edition, 1990,230
 -Adapted form Joseph Casallo http://www.abortionfacts.com/Copyright 2006. Heritage House '76, Inc.
MARITE MARIN LINDO
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