Peru is rich in biodiversity with millions of different species of plants and animals . However, many species are disappearing at an alarming rate . Biodiversity is reduced when ecosystems are modified and habitats of planets and animals are destroyed . Pollution and hunting are the main reasons why endangered species become extinct in Peru.
Pollution is a threat to the survival of endangered species . Currently, "around 11,000 species of animals are at risk of disappearing forever as consequence of it", according to National Reserve (Tambo Pata) from Madre de Dios . In Addition, habitats of animals are disappearing as a result of global warming and its survival is at risk ; humans are responsible of this environmental problem because we are contaminating our own air , environment, and local river with chemical waste and carbon emissions from cars . These effects are destroying animal habitats . According to some reseachers, principal threat for animal habitats are humans as they are destroying our forest, ecological places, oceans, and rivers . For instance, some newspapers published articles about the problem of the river in Madre de Dios which was contaminated plumb and hence many animals died ;it was caused by human activity.
Hunting is another significant cause of the extinction of endangered species . Each year , many animals are hunted from our jungle , and they are sold as food , pets . Comercial hunting , both legal and illegal (poaching) , is the principal threat . People trade endangered species for cash or exchange them for other useful objects ; for example , utensils in exchange for wild animals skins . Perhaps the most obvious problem associated with endangered species trade is that it can cause overexploitation to the point where the survival of of a species hangs in the balance . Historically, such overexploitation has resulted in extinctions or severely threatened species . Recent overexploitation of endangered species for trade has affected countless species . This has been well - publicized in the cases of orang - utan, koala, and others . Moreover, animals should never be killed just for sport or entertainment. Hunting, bullfighting, and any other sport that involves the killing of defenseless animals should be completety banned ; animals shouldn't be treated inhumanely because they are part of our life.
Therefore , people shouldn't allow this injustice , we should write a logical letter to the government stating our ideas about this issue and how it can be resolved . Safe zonas and national parks should be created for endangered species . Furthermore , wild animals shouldn't be kept as pets . Additionaly, we should promote the use of renewable energy resources such as wind and solar power . Everybody should try to head off the effects of global warming , giving endangered species a chance to servive.
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