High school and university’s lifestyles In our life, we have to pass different steps and one of this ladder is the transition from the high school to the university. Almost all the people think the university is better than the high school and say the university is a “different world”, they have almost the reason, but both high school and university have a few similarities which maybe some people do not consider valuable.
A first similarity is that neither the high school nor the university is great place to know people and share different kind of experience that then it helps you to face the reality. High school teaches you valuable thing, just as university has. The university is an important step in the life; likewise, high school helps to the life. According to some physiologist who advice each step is very important for our life.
Despite of these similarities, these both steps of the life have more difference than similarities.
The people put more importance to the university, whereas in the high school some people do not care about it. I think is because university’s students are more mature than school´s ones and the first kind of people think more in their future and they think more in the consequence of their acts. Moreover, in the university you see the society with other eyes, I mean, you face it with other way to thinking; in contrast, and in the school you think the world is perfect. In the school you have the vigilance of your parents or somebody, while in the university you should, I put “should” because I know some people who have still an infant behavior, learn to live and correct yourself. Nevertheless, the last dissimilarity is that you have an independent life in the university compared with a school’s life.
In sum, the school and the university are part of our life. As we see each step is different from other. You have to appreciate all your life and do not think that one steps is bad for you and you have to pass quickly it, you should learn a lot for your future life.
Cesar Salinas Romero
A first similarity is that neither the high school nor the university is great place to know people and share different kind of experience that then it helps you to face the reality. High school teaches you valuable thing, just as university has. The university is an important step in the life; likewise, high school helps to the life. According to some physiologist who advice each step is very important for our life.
Despite of these similarities, these both steps of the life have more difference than similarities.
The people put more importance to the university, whereas in the high school some people do not care about it. I think is because university’s students are more mature than school´s ones and the first kind of people think more in their future and they think more in the consequence of their acts. Moreover, in the university you see the society with other eyes, I mean, you face it with other way to thinking; in contrast, and in the school you think the world is perfect. In the school you have the vigilance of your parents or somebody, while in the university you should, I put “should” because I know some people who have still an infant behavior, learn to live and correct yourself. Nevertheless, the last dissimilarity is that you have an independent life in the university compared with a school’s life.
In sum, the school and the university are part of our life. As we see each step is different from other. You have to appreciate all your life and do not think that one steps is bad for you and you have to pass quickly it, you should learn a lot for your future life.
Cesar Salinas Romero
I liked your essay a lot because you provided many details in all the paragraphs. Moreover, you used a lot of comparison and contrast signals words such as likewise, whereas,etc that clarified your ideas. I guess you used a block organization. Your transition paragraph helped me to understand better the topic. Your essay has unity in all the paragraphs. However,i didn't understand the point that you mention "according to some psychologists....and the details before it" , so it would be a good idea if you change the structure of this part in order to clarify the ideas that you mentioned.
ReplyDelete:) I liked it a lot