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HOW TO CELEBRATE A GOOD CHRISTMAS WITH YOUR FAMILY 

            The meaning of christmas has been lost through out the years instead of being about love and sharing in family. It's all about how many hours you can spend in a store and how much money can you spend. It's so sad thot we have got away from the true meaning of christmas. Christmas means remembering when Jesus Christ is born. It also means a day to forgive and to love and the most important part is giving not receiving!!!. Follow these steps to remember the true meaning of christmas.
       
             The first step is to thank God for all the good things what he has done for us in the earth. Then do something for other people that need your help, just as God does. Don't think about the expensive gifts that your parents are going to give you this christmas, think better that other children aren't going to have anything to eat this christmas do something for them and don't let them have a bad christmas; because for Jesus christmas means to share each other.

                The second step is to spend christmas together with your family. Christmas should be a day for the family. As the family keeps the spark lighting with love, joy, peace, happines, and hope, you enjoy the true meaning of christmas. However, christmas has became any more a day about how much money can be spent in gifts. Many of you think that sending a present once a year is christmas; you are really confused. Since the true christmas, you enjoy just being with your family. But you make it seems like a day to give gifts and talk about santaa when you really should celebrate the true meannig of this day.

             

          In brief, christmas means to celebrate the birth og Our Lord and Savior Jesus Christ. Furthermore, It's a time to thank the Lord for all the good things what he have  gave.Christmas is day  to forgive and to love and the most important part  is giving not receiving. Also spending time with your family and have a great time whit them.


            Description of my writing:
  •   I chose this topic because I think that it's important know the true meaning of christmas. Currently, many people havechange the meaning of it; they don't know why we celebrate christmas they have forgotten that in this date Jesus was born.
Ines Remigio
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  1. Yomira SanchezDecember 17, 2011 at 5:46 PM

    I'm friend from Ines. In my opinion Ines wrote very nice essay. She used an interesting story to her introduction all that she said in her introduction is true. Nowadays, many people have change the true meaning of christmas which is really bad. Also, I believe that she used chronological order organization because she mentioned in her essay chronological order signal words and phrases. In addition, the body of her essay mentions true things thet we expect in this christmas. In conclusion Ines wrote very reflexive essay about christmas.

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  2. jorge AireCorreaDecember 20, 2011 at 10:46 AM

    Ines her essay has clear topic sentences in each paragraphs.However,there are some grammatical mistakes that prevent the paragraphs from being understood .I think your ideas can persuade the reader,but one may get lost in certain parts.The conclusion is just a summary of the topic sentences,which is not bat,but you could have added at least two lines to express your personal conclusion

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