According to a new statistic, in which showed that most parents think and agree that raising a child is a difficult task, but it is toughest for them when the child become spoiled because parents are not sure and do not know how to do it. However, if you are a parent and realized that you child may be in that way of becoming spoiled, do not panic and follow the next steps.
First, teach that giving is as important as receiving, it means that you can encourage your kid to participate in activities that help others, so they will learn to share with others since children who are not involved with helping others, tend to become self-centered and selfish. For example, you as a parent takes your kid with you when you help out as a volunteer for walks or runs to raise money for various causes, doing that kind of activities in the process your child will develop an increased of appreaciation for the life and understand the importance of the value of solidarity.
Second, set consistent limits, it means give your child clear rules and boundaries since if you do not set and enforce guidelines for good behavior; you are likely to have a child who is rude, uncooperative and disrespectful. So a part of your job as a parent is to teach social values to your kid such as patience, responsability, honesty and so on.
Finally, be positive role model. According to Karps, chief of Behavior Pediatric al the University of Misissippy Medical Center, says,"How you interact with your family serves as a model for your kids will behave with others." She is right because it is essential you as a parent show respect and consideration and others values towards others, so your child will follow you lead.
In conclusion, to successfully raise an obedient, creative and friendly kid instead of a spoiled or selfish one, it is important parents' attitude and actions, so the child continue having that bad behavior, they will not be prepared to succeed in life when they become adults, so it is never too late to change.
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I used an information (statistic) in the introduction to call the readers' attention and the paragraph ends with the thesis statement.
The body has 3 paragraphs and each one explains three steps for parents how to raise a spoiled child.
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